Soul Sight
Deep in the bog,
I did sleep,
covered with that,
that would make,
lesser men weep,
out I reached,
for that,
I could not see,
but my soul,
promised,
could and would be,
so I clawed,
dug and crawled,
still covered,
but free,
now I stagger,
mucky trail,
behind me,
soon,
I will walk,
In the distance,
I glimpse,
what once,
only my soul,
could see.
For everyone going through something. Whatever it may be.
Jen, it’s the other way around.
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I going to break it up a little this year with a more pieces like this. I have images which I want to add but it depends on how good the internet signal is up here. After trying five times to add an image I took for this post and having to walk away, to count to 1000, so I wouldn’t throw out my laptop. I don’t think that’s going to happen often. So some nice stuff between the bad stuff.
This is mostly because I am terrified of scarying you all away cause no one wants to read dark stuff all the time (I think) let me know what you think?
very nicely written enjoyed the read
Hey bjsscribbles, you write great poetry. I followed. 🙂
Thank you so much for the follow and compliment
Thanks for sharing. You have an amazing gift.
Thank you Everyvariety.
it speaks the soul and the struggles we all have….and the HOPE!
Yes I really believe the soul speaks and without hope all is lost.
Maiya, my blogging friend, I can so identify with this beautiful poem. Congratulations on your award, and write on!
I’m glad you can my friend. Thank you and lets both write on.
Grand metaphor for the struggle we go through when dealing with personal troubles 🙂
Andrea
Thank you Andrea! 🙂
Being who you are is bringing you support. I’m sure, that once in a while, the sun shines for you, if only for a short time. When it does, just let us know. In the meantime, write and heal ands don’t worry about your audience. Be yourself here of all places. 🙂
Thank you Single Malt Monkey for your encouragement. 🙂
Sometimes it’s really important to write the dark stuff. It lets it out. And often, other people can identify with it. Nobody is happy all of the time.
It’s a beautiful poem.
Thank you!!!
inspirational. as usual…God bless & lots of love always…
God bless and lots of love to you as well my friend.
This poem, I like. Only the soul feels and sees what the body can’t. Language of the soul is deeper and goes beyond the utterances of mere words that we sometimes foolishly seek.
Thank you Soulman, for this comment. I believe sometimes you need to listen to your soul, it is the source of all hope and then reach.
nicely written : )
Thank you. 🙂
Love the way you formatted it and the natural use of rhymes. Very well done!
Hello zumpoems, thank you for commenting on the rhyme and structure. I have never taken any formal poetry writing classes so love comments like this even bad ones (constructive ones pls). I ussually surf the net to learn about the different forms of poetry and terms. But always fall back to writing them this way. 🙂 Thank you so much.
Beautiful and empowering. Thank you for sharing.
Peace & grace,
~Miro
Thank you for reading and commenting, Warrior Poet.
I’d like to nominate you for the Kreativ Blogger award. Please see here http://snippetsandglimpses.wordpress.com/2012/01/03/the-versatile-blogger-award-and-the-kreativ-blogger-award/ for details if you’d like to accept. xo.
Thank you Nataly.
I love to break things up… part of life is not always the bright side. We have to be exposed to the dark and experience it in order to make sense of how to handle the bright. I have found we are measured by how we handle the tougher times.
Thank you for this comment MikeP, its inspired me to write a poem which I will post at a later date. Thanks again. 🙂
I am with Willowdot21. I know in my heart you are right; it just does not feel so now. You are a wordsmith visionary.
Write what you know and what you need to heal and to be whole. Your poetry sings off the page, Maiya. Darkness leads to light, yes?
I admire your writing so…
XXX Jen
When the road gets steeper I go to your blog Jen and I see real strength, true courage and I can go on. Thank you.
Very powerful Maiya…I like it.
Thank you!
Thank you for all your posts as far as dark well your insight and feelings in those times and the lessons learned and shared from them is inspiration to others to persevere and find the light of Love within… Be true to who you are and share what you feel! Thank you for sharing you and your Love! Happy New Year and may it be the best yet!
Thank you for your comment and dropping in.
Thank you so very much for sharing your beautiful poetry/ prose, Maiya. Wishing a prosperous and happy New Year. Love, cat. http://catsruledogsdroole.blogspot.com/
Hello my friend,
I joined your blogspot blog. I love your poetry. I hope you have a fantastic new year.
I do hope that as you say those in the deep dark place, reach for the light. Maiya your poetry is just marvellous don’t change it would not be you. Be you be honest be Maiya XXXXXXX
Thank you willow, for getting it all the time. May god bless you always.