Arise my sister from sleep,
homecoming bittersweet,
no mischievous smile,
or devilish grin,
Front lawn echoes,
of girlish shrill,
juicy gossip
and off key singing,
Soccer fields spur visions,
of bungled kicks,
hunky treats,
and Cola soft drinks,
Passing sidelong glances,
flirty winks,
haphazard cover stories,
aahh your first love bliss,
life ushered us down
separate paths,
different dreams
future’s beckoning
Christmas holidays
stirs memories,
a tug, a pull to the home,
of which you dreamed
down the road,
across the stream,
my feet refuse,
protesting,
new images,
made from whispers,
from broken souls,
still pondering,
over broken walls,
piecing screams,
pleading,
until silence reigned
supreme,
locked outside
unable to stop,
the hell
within,
one day,
someday,
I will begin,
my trek,
to say goodbye,
to the woman,
I never got to meet,
till then arise my sister
come and meet the children
of whom
I dreamed
Of all the poems I have written this was definately one of the hardest. I would love feedback on it. If any of you are willing to provide some.
Thank you Maiya
Thank you for sharing this excellent post. Very interesting ideas! (as always, btw)
Thank you for dropping in.
My sister your words touched me heart and soul. Thank you for sharing, off to read more!
🙂 Thank you very much for the follow my friend.
simply brilliant….
thank you 🙂
Powerful piece of work. Excellent.
I wrote and rewrote this so many times wanting to convey the sense of loss I felt when going back to my hometown and finding she was not there and finally settled on this one. If I was able to pass it along then I am glad.
When I was reading it, I wondered if it was about losing a loved one, and the comments confirmed it. It is very sad, but sometimes the hardest things to say are the things that need saying the most.
Regards.
Thank you Sandra.
A very moving poem!
Hey Ina, thank you for dropping in and for reading my poems. Pls call in again.
POWERFUL! reminds me a bit of Audre Lords stuff (RIP) she had the same sort of sneak up on you fierce that you do. If you have not read her do so quick quick! beautiful gut wrenching stuff; hers and yours. Peace, Jen
Thank you, I will check on Audre Lords poems. Thank for your comments.
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Thank you for the invitation I shall pop by soon.
Gut-wrenching in its emotion. A sad poem.
It was the beginning of my trek to say goodbye. 😦 Thanks for dropping in. I do hope you come back.
Maiya, I agree with all the other comments….a haunting and poignant piece….I say this to you as I remember what it was like in my former life.
hey ahhhpoetry, thank you very much for your feedback. I am so glad you are in a better place in your life now. Thank you for sharing!
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Wowwww, another nomination, thank you jadedheart.
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Wowww..THANK YOU! I will be by asap. Thank you for subscribing to my blog. Thank you so much.
Very intense and emotional..thank you for sharing..:-)
Hello Abichica, thanks for the comment, its nice of you to drop in.
Thanks for stopping by my word press blog, Majya. Your blog is one after my own heart. Thank you for sharing. Please feel free to visit my other blog, as well: http://catsruledogsdroole.blogspot.com/ as I’m much more active in blogger. Stay in touch, my new friend. Love, cat.
Hey Cat, I love your photos, I’m glad you like my blog thank you for subscibing I will be by your blog shortly to do the same.
The reality of abuse and violence grips so many with fear, often paralyzing their dreams and hopes, sometimes taking lives. This is very soul stirring and effectively written. I like it a lot.
Thank you bluegem, Kevin and Iscottthoughts for taking the time to read my poems and leave feedback. Writing this poem was very hard this is the first time I faced the issue of the loss of the woman in this poem.
Beautifully written, intense and haunting; well done!
Thank you for your comment 🙂
its very lovely and very beautiful poem from kevin well done
Thank you Kevin. Nice of you to drop in.